if you're looking to instantly improve the quality of your yoga marketing materials -- i.e. your blog, website copy, flyers, brochures, etc. -- to ensure they get a better response rate, start using this simple trick today (and avoid the mistake i made for years!). take a look at how you write -- and who you write for. are you addressing your students/followers/readers as a whole group? or as individuals?
i think the easiest and best way to illustrate the point i'm trying to make here is with a little test. read the following two email intros, and you decide which one appeals to you more:
- hi yoga teachers - mark your calendars! on thursday, march 21st i’ll be hosting a FREE webinar about how to establish an online presence and grow your following. interested in joining? you can sign up here. want the details? here’s what i’ll be covering during the 45 minute webinar...
- howdy :-) mark your calendar! on thursday, march 21st i’ll be hosting a FREE webinar about how to establish an online presence and grow your following. interested in joining? you can sign up here. want the details? here’s what i’ll be covering during the 45 minute webinar...
so, which one did you like better?.... the second one? i thought so! ok, even if you didn't like the opener of "howdy", the second one still rings in as more friendly and authentic, right? so, why is that?...
that's because, in the second email, i'm talking to you, and just you! even if you have a ton of readers or email subscribers, remember that each and every one of them is an individual. and, when you write, remember that! your readers want to be seen for who they are individually, not to be lumped together with everyone else.
don't make the mistake i did (for way too long), trying to write for your entire audience -- instead, write for each unique audience member! by keeping this in mind, the quality of your writing will instantly improve leaps and bounds, and each and every reader will love that you're speaking just to her!